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Glub Glub.
Drink it down.
Half Full.
Half Empty.
Gone.

Vodka
Whiskey
Gin and Rum
Tequila
Beer and wine

Loss comes in many flavors.

We come in many flavors.

Life - It drinks us down.

And we're
Half full
Half empty
Gone
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Okay. This is an experiment. I don't usually use prompts, but here we go. A poem about loss, without any articles. That would mean, no "a's," "an's," or "the's."

For all you other masochistic poets out there, who just don't have a hard enough time writing a decent poem...

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The ending... feels so potent for some reason...
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~VetchVespers May 30, 2009  Student General Artist
That's just cause your drunk. :drunk: .... ;)
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