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It's hard to talk about something
When your tongue keeps taking tumbles
And your mind keeps going numb,
Gumming up the works
Filling up your head with sand
As you go
Down
Down
Down...

And there goes the tangent again.
A thought that slips and slides
Like a fish through water
Or a bird through air.
I'll catch it one day.
Know what to say.
Know how to broach the subject to myself.
But not today.
Today it slips away
Like sand.
Haha! Okay. I'm convincing myself this is halfway decent. Maybe my poets' block has lost me or maybe its just seeing what I'll do next. We shall seeeeee....
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YouInventedMe Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009   Writer
this has great flow
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VetchVespers Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2009  Student General Artist
Thankyou very much. :)
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praytell Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009
:) been there, and will be again, i am sure:)this piece even feels mercurial:)
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:iconvetchvespers:
VetchVespers Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2009  Student General Artist
Thankyou. :thanks:
By brain keeps sliding around of late. :zombie:
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:iconpraytell:
praytell Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2009
got that teflon brain pan too, huh? :)
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:iconvetchvespers:
VetchVespers Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2009  Student General Artist
:brainless: erps... It slipped out. :P
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:iconpraytell:
praytell Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2009
hahaha, i think mine ran out my ear mowing the lawn today:)
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:iconvetchvespers:
VetchVespers Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2009  Student General Artist
Interesting way to fertalize. :D
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:iconpraytell:
praytell Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2009
na, i think it killed the grass . . .
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amityerin Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009
I like it, describes just how I was feeling a couple days ago.
Brava!
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