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Heartbeat chaos, turn my tears to sweat.

It's stop jerk motion.  

Don't find yourself    yet.

Black flame halo.  

Burning bloodscream wings.

I don't need a name. Just what the air sings...


Tells me all I need to know...

No place,
No time,
No flavor

Sometimes it's enough

To be living fire.



There's something else to be found here...
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I'm pretty happy with this one's wording. I'm playing a bit with the format. New experimentation...

Any suggestions? Any comments? Boo format? Yay format? What WHAT?!
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:iconhell-on-a-stick:
sometimes staying lost
is an answer
all its own.
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~VetchVespers May 16, 2009  Student General Artist
Indeed.
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:iconpiscesandthediamonds:
~Piscesandthediamonds May 11, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Haunting.
"Sometimes it's enough

To be living fire.



There's something else to be found here..."

Profound.
I feel the bones of this very often.
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~VetchVespers May 11, 2009  Student General Artist
Thankyou. That means alot. I'm very glad I could get the idea across. I think my poetry is usually more literal.
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~VetchVespers May 11, 2009  Student General Artist
As much as a zombie likes sweet sweeeeet braaaaaaiiiiiiinzzzz?
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:iconpraytell:
well . . .i can only assume, seeing as home i havent had the brain cravin flung on me yet:) (did you see my okie showin? :) )
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~VetchVespers May 11, 2009  Student General Artist
Oh lordy! My inbox is so full, and I'm so behind. I'll get there though. Don't worry. ;) I'm making my rounds.
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~VetchVespers May 11, 2009  Student General Artist
Aaaugh. Wrong poem. Sorry. :slow:

Thankyou though. :)
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