I've painted you quite roughly dear
But never fear
I'm here to clarify
So help me die
A little longer
Live a little stronger
Sweet semper fi
You know its such dessert
Such pleasure when you hurt.
You're S & M
You little gem
Upon your whim
I'll struggle blindly
Untie the nots
While shooting shots
Of wretched carpe diem
Ill find the way
To drink the day,
To be your prey,
To let you play
Upon me dear,
A tool for truth
To cut your tooth
And hang your nails upon
Sharpened, honed
With blood and bone
Carved upon and set in stone
A guidepost standing crucified
Until you give me leave to die.
You're comment about the Latin is a VERY good point. And one I had not thought of, blast it. I'm not sure if I can change it though. I'll have to look into it. See if I can work it in without being clunky. Thanks.
I think it's interesting. I wrote two poems for the Muse contest. This one, and one that's much more light and fluffy. I think this one's a hell of a lot better, but the other got more attention. People don't like that suffering.
It is certainly interesting. Do you like the artist Brom?
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